Moon over the Water
Moon over the WaterHeadland plunges deep into the chasm,scatters light and shade like shattered glass;rocks hang caught in steep, precarious balanceover snarling waves and waiting jaws.Beach coils...
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A very vivid and descriptive write,Davie, a real treat to read, BG
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An interesting write- rather reminds me of a painting (would paste-in the addy as the two seem to go well together.) Any rate, that was what it reminded me of while reading, the imagery is similar and...
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i enjoyed this.. several images whispering through in my mind for me.. ^_^; much enjoyed! so vivid!
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moon over the water -- one of my favorite things! striking imagery here, davie ... haunting and capturing the untamed spirit of the sea ... this flows very nicely ... well done!Why do we close our...
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Many thanks, BG, Po, BWA and JaML for your kind words and thoughts. I love the sea .. and the moon, and if you put them together you get all sorts of possibilities!Davie
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Such a fresh and original look at the moon over water - I love the rhythm and enjoyed the read. Beautifully crafted Davie!"A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a...
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Thank you so much, Valoe - as always, you grasp the essential point - for me, it was the rhythm that gave the poem. Davie
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A beautiful reflection of the moon over water Davie........WRITE ON!!Poetic Columnist for Crop & Prop Internationalwww.cropandprop.comPublisher/Editor of WRITE ON!! Poetry Magazette
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